BBC Complaints,
PO Box 1922
Glasgow
G2 3WT
To Whom It Concern:
As an American, I read your internet news now and then just to be updated about activities around the world. I read a story of the Berlin Wall artwork that is supposed to be re-furbished around the next few months. Unfortunately, there was only a few sentences explaining what was going on when I think something so big deserves a little more acclaim. It is implausible to think that something so big goes so unnoticed for a world news company.
Even though the Berlin Wall fell almost twenty years ago, does not mean it no longer effects. I just think there should be more hype and news surrounding the repainting of the Wall Artworks that have been degenerating over the years. This is a big deal and I think you should cover more of what is happening in Germany. I hope to read more about what is going on in Berlin within the next few months on your BBC News website.
Sincerely
David
High school Student
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2 comments:
This was a good choice of audience for your letter.
You use the vocab well, but then you repeat very simple words like big and it detracts from the overall impact.
I think it is not big news because it happened in the past but i like the letter.
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